A Change of Clothes

January 6th, 2019, 8:35 am

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Reply Ladon (Guest), January 8th, 2019, 12:47 pm

Huh Hey, it’s that guy from the dining hall like 2 months ago. Remember me? Doesn’t matter. I just figured I’d finally drop my first comment. Overall, this comic is surprisingly good. Like, I even like whatever art style that is. And even though the haphazard and random jokes at the beginning were a bit of a turn-off, I genuinely laughed at “Star Wars episode 5, empire strikes back”. It sorta took an emotional turn very abruptly with the death of Beans andI think it was sorta hard to feel bad about that because everything previous had been hijinks so that was kinda hard to take seriously but I don’t know what you want, maybe it wasn’t supposed to be taken seriously. Anyway, the story gets more cohesive after that although I still find myself kinda on guard and not sure when the next change of universe will be. This has been my experience of the comic. Not a critique, just what it’s been like to me. I hope it’s helpful in some way.

Reply Quatral, January 8th, 2019, 7:03 pm

@Ladon: Thank you for reading! The tone shifts often in the comic I admit, but it's all part of a larger aesthetic scheme working in tandem with the worldbuilding to tease at a larger hidden plot that I hope to slowly reveal! I hope you stick around, I'm aiming for 40ish pages for this chapter. Your feedback is definitely welcome!

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